tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3564931589218583052.post6867178305068867739..comments2012-09-23T01:48:40.229-07:00Comments on Three Obstructions: Week 4: "Biography" - BenAndrewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05538152505306658466noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3564931589218583052.post-58820588079448558052012-08-27T20:51:34.331-07:002012-08-27T20:51:34.331-07:00Ben I always admire your writing. This was great.....Ben I always admire your writing. This was great.. off to read Andrew's now..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3564931589218583052.post-16554605628190387112012-07-10T14:53:53.020-07:002012-07-10T14:53:53.020-07:00I think this is a really strong and emotionally ma...I think this is a really strong and emotionally mature piece- despite it being about the naivety of youth. For some reason it really resonated with me, particularly regarding the lies we tell others and those we tell ourselves.<br /><br />And for it to be a biography, to draw from personal experience like that and have such empathy and clarity for the players in our own personal narratives I think is just really impressive, brave and honest.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3564931589218583052.post-10340188628212170262012-07-07T10:42:44.776-07:002012-07-07T10:42:44.776-07:00You have a very unique writing style, but to me ma...You have a very unique writing style, but to me many of your metaphors are too explicitly stated, leaving little room for interpretation or creative reading. That doesn't discredit your writing, in fact it's the kind of creative license most great authors and poet have, just a random thought from a random person.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com